A Good Heart, Is a Thing so Rare (Sad Story)

*Please be kind enough in finishing the poem if you do have started, be patient on this one*

A young couple with young promises
Journey together as their love took chances
(Couple talking about a funny topic, both
Are laughing tenderly while on a ride)

As the gushing wind blew hard
While the snow whispers, loosing guard
(Late in the evening where coldness took
place, the woman shivered and held the mans arms)

The smooth hand of a maiden rose
Held the mans hand, his gentle eyes closed
(The girl held his partner's hand feeling
its warmth, laid her head in his shoulder)

A wrong turn dictated what will happen
A studded belt the girl quickly fasten
(The man made a wrong turn, loose the brakes
while the girl with no hesitation fastens the seat belt)

A misfortune held their lives for a big change
The evening in state of tension, moment deranged
(An accident occurred, both are in critical condition,
the happening altered each of their lives)

Good hearts appeared with a helping hand
With kindness, delivered them with no command
(A help arrived quickly, delivered them
to the nearest hospital in the vicinity)

When death draws near, taking lives with no pause
Lingers mysteriously, killing with no cause
(Both are in critical condition, the risk is great.
under crucial operation)

Morning light would be so bright and warm
If you have your love one near, feel no harm
(both are saved and gazed along
with the radiant sunshine)

A life paralyzed with no hope and dreams
Better be dead, departed, so lonely it seems
(The girl upon waking up, can't see anything,
Feel cursed and in state of being forgotten, shes blind)

A world of shame, hiding the feeling of loves regret
Broken promises with vain, casted away and forget
(the man was ashamed for what happened to her
girlfriend, went away without notification)

A life being crushed by sorrow and pain
A bleeding heart easily being forgotten and rotten
(The girl felt so sad and cried deep inside,
Grasp her hand which she almost crushed)

With a life of no use for living and sharing
Would rather be compared dead for eternal living
(With much burden and pain, the girl did not survive
such misery where her loved one abandoned her)

Roses for the dead sprinkled over on a coffin of departure
The girl lying inside and at last felt none of loves torture
(The girl was buried after her death, red roses
were present, felt no pain for what her love did bring)

The shameful man attended for a respect to show
Never guided his partner, the reality he didn't even know
(the girl's boyfriend attended the burial with a heart
so selfish and unkind, didn't really know what exactly happened)

A letter of everlasting love of a truly unselfish heart
Surrendered everything, even her life would be fallen apart
(A letter on top of the coffin exclusively for her boyfriend
That contains her love, if the man only knew)

An eye of hope and love which the girl offered
Gave her eyes to the boy, rather be blind she preferred
(In the operation, the boy was really the blind but because of the loved of the girl, she donated her eyes to his love)

A Good heart of hope and eternal sacrifices
So hard to find just to offer a true love in some cases
(In this world, it is too rare to find a person with
Such good heart that would be willing to suffer for love)

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