Who knew

by Finalgravedigger   Oct 7, 2007


Who Knew

Thrown down to earth
to feel the dirt
tainted parts leave a mark
scarring his little heart.

Who knew his love
wanted to rip him apart
always thought they were above
even from the very start.

Who knew one could give his soul
to no longer be whole
to cry every night
left only to be in miserable fright.

He screams why
while looking at the sky
Cursing his loves words
that would make his life go forward.

"I love you" were the best
he had ever heard
but now their just the worst
and theres nothing to look toward.

Who knew a thing so great
would end in ultimate pain
and leave a person with such hate
with all efforts invain.

( Please vote and comment )

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow i can relate,
    great work
    keep it up!:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade

    Wow!
    this poem is awesome, your really good
    i've read a few of yours but this on is my fav so far, AWESOME 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Risen Dreams

    Your poetry is really good keep it up you have alot going for you

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathIsTheOnlyWay

    Hey your stuff is pretty good I like the imagination and the way you rhythm things its really unique
    Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This was really good, 5/5
    the emotions are so true and easy to relate to, i really liked this piece. it flowed really well and was really honestly written. well done!!