Very sad peace, but much of this we can all relate to. We've all felt abandoned by ones we've loved at one time or another, whether those feelings were justified for us or not. But this piece has that bit of hope in it, and understanding, and this whole idea that you will welcome him back if he just comes home. It's nice!
Charisma*

I to know what its like to have a rough relationship with your father and you amazingly put it into a poem. Thanks for the advise on mine, I don't really pay attention to syllables I just kinda throw some stuff together that sounds good. HA, but I'll take it in mine, thanks again.

This was very touching and it really made me smile at the end. The vocabulary really made this piece wonderful as it flowed with the sentences.

Beautiful write :)

5/5

Wow. i love your choice of words. it was truly an amazing piece. it got a little sad when you were explaining how he left, but at the end, you made it sound so wonderful, another priceless piece from your amazing mind. a def 5/5 from me

nikki