" never will they know." << never, will
"now...naked to the world." . . . now - naked to. . .

I did enjoy it.
Excluding the few punctuation mistakes it's perfect. The flow was great. ALONG WITH THE MEANING.

You pulled it off again, darling.
I must say, with completely honesty, I didn't think you'd be this good. IN A GOOD WAY. I knew by the poems you entered that you were a good writer. But, the more I read the more I like your poetry. I can tell a lot of it comes from the heart or at least means something to you.

I'm fond of that kind of poetry.
It's even better if it's good too. LIKE YOURS!

Lol.
5/5