The rhymes were amazing and so intune with each other

This was really good, i liked it, it flowed so well.
Tara-Kay
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Nice job...makes me want to read the beginning of the poem. A very good write. I always enjoy your work!
Charisma*

Mmmmmm always a wonder moment when I read your work....but I am biased

This poem is breathtaking, honestly one of the best pieces i have read in a while

I really love this poem, you have penned it so brilliantly.Great job.

Chavii.

WOW that was simply beautiful , it made me tear up , well written and so deep , I could feel your hurt , thank you ,

From being left alone to hide
From silent torture that resides
From wishes never brought to bear
On such a soul so unaware
Great job, Deb, your friend Tracy d(-_-)smiles--------5/5

Great poem amazing flow and rhymes, good work expressing yourself

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

Hmmm...this sounds awfully alike this egar allen poe poem I read...but you changed it up nicely I guess...!

Thats like omg lol lmao wow so nice omg i loved it so much woooo so nice imma 5 it 4 u

Deb
You have done an amazing job on this piece. Your writing always leaves me in awe. Word choices and imagery are excellent.
Love you Cindy

Great work. i loved your poem. keep it up great work. you have talent.

Great work :]

So Amazing<3

I think it's a gr8 poem :):)
ur soukyyy

Amazeinig job. i know how u feel

Wow... i'm speechless.. so awesome man! damn!

Very thought provoking and brilliant write...

so good....

What a beautiful poem. It has a beautiful flow in it and the wording is great!

Take care and see you in the club!

5/5 Ingrid