"Where do I go without you?" << I think that it would sound better as 'can' instead of 'do'. But, that's just my opinion.

"I don't think so, not when your not mine." << That line kinda messes up the flow in that one stanza. . . try; ?
" I don't so, when you aren't mine"
. . . The 'not' is kind of bam. And, it doesn't go with the poem. the poem is like.. wonderful, beauty almost. Just the way it flows, and the word seems so ugly in it. Lol. :|

"am to weak" << too*

I think in the last stanza there was a bit much with the elpipsis. [[sp]]. [[Which is the ...'s]]

Okay, let me tell you first off.. This poem is amazing. It's like a helpless beauty, exluding the few things I stated above.
You must remember though, what I think about a poem doesn't apply to everyone's thoughts. Especially yours.
Don't just change it because someone doesn't like it. It's about what you think and what you like and feel.

Amazing poem though, darling.
4/5