My Last Words.

by ABake   Oct 7, 2007


You already moved on, completely forgotten me.
Now I am alone, my heart is broken as can be.
I caused all of this, trust me, I know I did.
I was stupid, my feelings for you I hid.

I am now regretting what I did in the past.
Now I am in a relationship I know will not last.
I really am sorry, these words I hope you believe.
I now understand why you chose to leave...

I know you really don't care, so I will let go.
You meant a lot to me, I just hope you know.
To you, these are my last words, I'm not going to lie.
Sorry sweetie, but it is time to say goodbye.

[Idk where this came from. Lol. Hope you enjoy]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Ohhh.
    Honest to God, I didn't see any mistakes. A few places I seen words that could have been jumbled around to sound better, but at the same time they fit it perfectly. Because, they sounded and flowed just right. If that makes any sense.

    Okay, what I mean is for OTHER poems they could have been jumbled around, but for this one they fit. [[Much better explanation. Haha.]]

    You did a wonderful job sweetie. (:
    Keep it up.