Not A Day Goes By.

by Teria   Oct 7, 2007


Not A Day Goes By.

Written by daylight, not a soul disappeared -
with a heart for the lost, and rage for the feared.
How long shall she await the day that you come?
Surely it has been too long; where are you from?
Since not a day goes by, time passes slowly
the look within says " you'll never come for me".
Harsh words implanted inside of each blank page,
scribbles of pain from hearts of fear, loss, and rage.
Written by daylight, not a soul disappeared-
with a heart for the lost, and rage for the feared.

How long shall she await the day that you come?
Surely it has been too long; where are you from?
Proven that societies right, a heartless thief,
taking yet, another hopeless life full of grief.
Surely it is not fair to take her away
from the dreams that she lost in her yesterday(s).
For, her dreams were of you and your promises -
a heart of the lost, with fantasies Bliss.
Written by daylight, not a soul disappeared-
with a heart for the lost, and rage for the feared.

Since not a day goes by, time passes slowly
the look within says " you'll never come for me".
Awaiting the thoughts do that torture the brain,
driving a woman of faith, weak and in pain,
to places of satisfaction - evil are you,
to replace thoughts of kindness, tender and true. . .
The last time of asking - how long shall she wait?
Death is on her side, of which you did create:
Written by daylight, not a soul disappeared-
with a heart for the lost, and rage for the feared.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. I frikken loved this.

    This, my dear is just perfect.
    I honestly can not find anything wrong with this.

    I enjoyed the repetition you used in this, sometimes I think repetition can totally kill a poem, but you managed to pull it of wonderfully here.

    The flow, was FLAWLESS. Throughtout the entire piece.

    Imagery and wording were beautifully done, as always.

    I don't know what else to say, short of, I love this.

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow. That was great. Your word choice is amazing. I love how you only repeated certain lines which added an extra something.

    The emotion in this peice was deep and I liked that. You kept my attention and your flow was flawless. Great job =))
    5/5

    Amber..

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was so beautifully written, every line just flowed into the next so perfectly.
    loved it
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

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