Take Me Away.

by Teria   Oct 7, 2007


Take Me Away.

Your touch so gentle upon my skin.

And, seen beneath the clear blue sky,
lies a world so delicate and wondrous.

With perfections inside each flawless word,
lies the truth of honesty within your soul.

Your touch so gentle upon my skin.

And, deep inside that heart of yours,
I hear the words uttered peacefully.

With my heart at ease I can catch my breath.
And, I beg of you to take me away - -

Because, your touch is so gentle upon my skin.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Even though this didn't rhyme, the flow was spot on.

    Despite being relatively short, you still managed to pack in so much depth and emotion and that is not always easy to do so well done for that.

    Again, I enjoyed the repetiton, you seem to have a knack of getting it to fit perfectly into the piece without being overbearing.

    I found this to be beautifully and elegantly written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I thought you did a marvellous job my friend.
    The flow was flawless, and i loved the repitition.
    You're so talented, sweetie
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

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