I thought you did a marvellous job my friend.
The flow was flawless, and i loved the repitition.
You're so talented, sweetie
Love Tara-Kay
x

Even though this didn't rhyme, the flow was spot on.

Despite being relatively short, you still managed to pack in so much depth and emotion and that is not always easy to do so well done for that.

Again, I enjoyed the repetiton, you seem to have a knack of getting it to fit perfectly into the piece without being overbearing.

I found this to be beautifully and elegantly written.