Very amazingly written
keep it up!
-Lisa

I rele like this poem great job on it u seem to be a very good writer keep it up

-Kelly xoxo

This is a great poem... is that book sold in stores or odered?

Noelle

That was great.5/5 please vote/comment
on my poems.

Amazing poem, you should enter that on poems.com

Nice - may the rain find a way to fall on you each day. keep writing

Great write mate, it made me feel so refreshed, as if i had been walking in the rain, mmm great, xp