"Sprained wrists that deserve to be broken"
The best line in that poem, in my opinion.
I've always liked that word.. deserve.
"I deserve this, you deserve that"
You might deserve something, but will you get it?
& I absolutely love when people say ..
"You deserved to get .. (dot dot)"
They're trying to bring the "good" into the "bad".
If that makes any sense to you.

It amazes me how much you've grown.
I know I've said this to you.. but;
I still have no idea how it happened.
I know that people grow as writers,
and that is what you have done.
It just seems odd.. for one way of another.

Anyway, I've decided to go ahead and comment your poems,
because I felt like I haven't been your number one fan.
If I want to wear that title, and I do..
that means I have to act the part.
But, if you don't like that,
there's that wonderful little delete button..
and that would be completely up to you.

Either way, this poem is a very good one.
The emotion, depth, and flow were all there.
A great job, Philly.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

"Under the stars and skys, I've called the clouds and they'll be on my side."
^^ LOVE IT!

You mispelled 'rightfully'

I love it, Phily. Honestly, it's wonederful. Reminded me of why I (use) to read you stuff. I should start again, eh. (:
SOPOSTLOTSOFPOEMS. (:
Not too fast though, I have to keep up with them.