Comments : There's More To The Story Than The End

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I've always wanted to go on highway 66. (:

    Well, I can surely say that your writing style hasn't changed, it's still amazing and catching. Along with the poem. (:
    You've always been a great writer, darling.
    I see you're getting better, tooo. Hehe.

    My favorite part was : [[well, i loved it all.. but yeah]]
    I don't like being alone but sometimes even loneliness has its company; maybe the piano will rip apart my soul and give me a melody worth living for.
    ^^ amazing.
    it like made me want to cry.
    lol.
    ily&kiu.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    "Break your heart on a stone and you'll know what a heart break really is; nothing short of emotional trauma"

    Completely AMAZING, Philly. Truly.
    One of your best poems, by far.
    Very tense, raw emotions.
    Flow was outstanding,
    Heart was well thought out.
    Overall Rating: 6.0/5