Well, I can surely say that your writing style hasn't changed, it's still amazing and catching. Along with the poem. (:
You've always been a great writer, darling.
I see you're getting better, tooo. Hehe.
My favorite part was : [[well, i loved it all.. but yeah]]
I don't like being alone but sometimes even loneliness has its company; maybe the piano will rip apart my soul and give me a melody worth living for.
^^ amazing.
it like made me want to cry.
lol.
ily&kiu.
"Break your heart on a stone and you'll know what a heart break really is; nothing short of emotional trauma"
Completely AMAZING, Philly. Truly.
One of your best poems, by far.
Very tense, raw emotions.
Flow was outstanding,
Heart was well thought out.
Overall Rating: 6.0/5