Very deep, I really like it. It is admirable that you can express so powerful thoughts in short poetry forms. Excellent job on this one!

WOW, a very powerful senryu, well done Sir!

Very deep for a short poem. Power is in every word! 5/5

A nicely written poem. I loved the message you portrayed into it. It was powerful and strong. A sweetly written poem which expressed what you wanted to say clearly. Loved it Greenie keep writing ~Mel