The ideal master teacher (sonnet)

by Fsams   Oct 8, 2007


The best teacher, I've met so far
unique and cute, dear you are

The rights and wrongs I've learned from you
I worth them all, I know that's true

The things you say, true and real
It makes you unique and so ideal

I wish you luck, bliss and wealth
God keep you fit, sound in health

Never feel worried for God's with you
Whatever you dream, it will come true

You've guided me the best right way
For all your help I thank you today

You are, the ideal master teacher
Who've helped me like a holy preacher

Written by Fsams
02/09/2007
Sunday 15:30

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  • 16 years ago

    by Annaam

    This is a great write!! 8)
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Beautiful poem... its so nice that you wrote a poem about someone who has inspired you and makes you want to go on with life being the best you can be.

    i enjoyed reading this one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is a excellent dedication to someone who really means a lot to you. It's perfect, and had a pretty good flow to it. :] You did a excellent job explaining several things about this person that makes them mean something to you. Great work. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Love this one.
    Seems the person you discrbe is very special to you, so you made yourself very clear, that's good.
    Very sweet you wrote it for her. A lucky person.
    Nice words and good flow.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The last stanza is the best here. The structure of the sonnet was kept here perfectly. The rhymes and choosing of words fit the subject. An excellent poem no doubt 5/5

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