This is wonderful dedication to that person that you described through the poem. The flow of this piece is great, and you picked good rhyming scheme and form.
Keep writing! :)

Lovely poem Fsams. This poem shows true admiration to a teacher and it is very well written. The rhymes are very well. 5.5 for the beautiful write.

Great job! You describe plenty in your rhymes! 5/5

Hmm.
". . . I worth them all. . . " << That doesn't make much sense? If you mean something by it and it's meant to be that way, please let me know what it means. Lol. :|

Last stanza : "Who've" << Should be "Who's" , meaning; who has. instead of who have.

OKAY, this is a great, great poem. Honest to God. A few mistakes, but the flow is great. Along with the, quite sweet, meaning. There's depth to it, and it's a good terse poem.

Keep it up, darling.

Wow oooooooo. what a nice poem. i loved it. great great work 5/5

Very well writtin. i enjoed reading this very much. i rated this a 5

Wow this ones really good too!

This is a really great poem, i reckon you used the sonnet form reli well!!!

This is so good, i love the language you've used, i think it makes the poem flow really well. The choice of form is also excellent.
DnB

This poem is really beautiful.
It shows love to some one important and special. I must agree with all that all in all this one is 5/5

This is very nice and
best I would say. I wonder who hav downvoted it :o

With love
Jiya

I think i r/r/c'd this once before but not according to the comments, so i'll do it now, i thought it was a wonderful piece and in every poem i read, you prove me right over and over, i hope you showed her this poem, it was sweet. 5/5

nikki

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This is a good poem

i was confused by the saying
I worth them all

i didn't know what that ment but i'm not the writter
again good job

I love this. To me it seems simple, yet deep. Good flow and the rhyme doesn't seem forced. 5/5

Excellent poem. Very strong emotions and your flow was amazing. Although I didnt really get the ending, I thought it could have been more creative. But very good anyway. Good job 5/5

This was a good poem I think there has always been two types of poems one for the public and one for families and friend those of more of a personal nature. I beleive this to be a personal poem. It was very enjoyable Plot121

This poem was really sweet.
the flow was nice and so was your ryhming.
i loved the whole thing, from the beginnging to the end.

5/5
cindy

I loved this! It flowed so beautfiully and I could really relate. When a teacher really reaches out to you, its wonderful. Well done *5/5*

The last stanza is the best here. The structure of the sonnet was kept here perfectly. The rhymes and choosing of words fit the subject. An excellent poem no doubt 5/5

Love this one.
Seems the person you discrbe is very special to you, so you made yourself very clear, that's good.
Very sweet you wrote it for her. A lucky person.
Nice words and good flow.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care