This is a excellent dedication to someone who really means a lot to you. It's perfect, and had a pretty good flow to it. :] You did a excellent job explaining several things about this person that makes them mean something to you. Great work. 5/5.

Beautiful poem... its so nice that you wrote a poem about someone who has inspired you and makes you want to go on with life being the best you can be.

i enjoyed reading this one. 5/5

This is a great write!! 8)
5/5.