How do you that? I am so impressed and once again you amaze me with your words. Your writing really improves and this poem is flawless. It is so beautiful and you wrote it powerfully! Well done, you should be proud on your self. I absolutely love everything about this piece.

Awesome you really have a great talent and this poem shows how gifted you are. i loved reading it and thank you so very much fro the comment you left me. Keep up the awesome wrting. Shanik

First off id like to say thank you for commenting on my poem i appreciate it. second this poem is fantastic. i love the flow and rhyming i though it was beautiful. 5/5
Take Care
xHSx

Wow... this is amazing, truly breathtaking. I can't express how much this piece touched me. It is not ordinary sad poem, it is original, deep piece painted with such intense sorrow. You did great job with rhymes, too.
Amazingly done!