When you held me

by denita   Oct 8, 2007


:hey this may not be a great poem but it is what i feel:

:thanks for reading:

when you held me in your arms,
i felt no need to be alarm,
when you held me in your arms,
i knew you would keep me from all harm.
when you held me in your arms,
your love covered me gently,
when you held me in your arms,
i could feel your love for me and i the knew that you really cared for me and no other one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Nicely written piece, very emotional.
    You expressed feelings in a good way in the whole poem.
    You should capitalize I and maybe rearrange some lines to create smoother flow, but that's just my opinion.
    All in all, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by denita

    GOOD JOB

  • 17 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    Amazinly Wrote Well Done

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Love it..its right from the heart..keep up the work=]

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Aww.. i remember that feeling.

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