This is a wonderful poem, the only problem being again some of the words, I didn't know what some of them mean.. creating a big problem.. If I dont know what some of the words mean then I dont really understand the poem as I should.
But I think I understood what you were trying to say, and if I understood it correctly then non the less, yet again, this is a wonderful poem.
You have a talent, use it.

xoxo
--Chelsey

Big fat WOW. I attempt acrostic poetry often and struggle sometimes to find the words I want to say quickly and effectively. I believe that because you had such a small space in which to write this poem you incorporated all you needed whilst making it an exellent poem. Nice job xxx alex xxx

Your grand use of vocabulary shined through this piece although it was a short poem it complomented your talents in usage of word remarkably great job Plot121