Excellent poem. I can relate to the first love. My first love....... he had hurted me badly. My problem is not exactly the same as your though. Whatever your first love said to you wasn't right. Message me. I love the poem though cause you can tell that this came straight from your heart.

That's so sad..and it's bad that all the bad things seem to happen to the greatest people..but I know there are those good moments that we wish we could keep there and never go to the bad times again...really good poem..5/5

amanda.

Omg im so sorry =[
I noe what it feels like
But I really like this poem<3
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Hey! Im Really Sorry About YOur Dad! But well done! Awsome poem!

Um first love is such a hard subject to speak of because no matter what you are goin to get hurt in the end....but dont believe anything he has said to you. you are an amazing person and a brilliant poet. remember that and that i am alway here for you

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