Trust and Care

by Shinobi   Oct 8, 2007


You are my best friend
You have my soul's key
Lonely or happy you are there
Why can't you trust me?

In times when we laughed
In times I felt bad
I was open to you all the way
And with you, never felt sad

I am supposed to be your best friend
A person you can wipe on your tears
Someone who listens and cares
A person who cheers

You are my best friend
You have my soul's key
Lonely or happy you're there
Why can't you trust me?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I really liked this one beacuse your flow was perfect and your rhyming helped it bounce along quite lovely. amazing job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I like the repetition of the first stanza, for it was a very sweet one. The was great here as well. A very pleasant read.

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Shinobi,
    I think the flow was just a little off, but that might be me ^_^ I like the topic that you chose, and you were able to describe it really well!
    This was a pleasure to read!
    I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up, 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. Do you remember me?

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