by Krissymkitty Oct 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm still here |
by Hear You Me
Short and bitter, but overall tis an ok poem. i think you could really expand on it though, and make it deeper. you know, like include more emotions, even if youre feeling numb, just explain it more and stuff. it could be a real masterpiece, i like it |