Oh, this is beautiful.. So sad, and so full of woe. It is a truly amazing piece. Well done. xx

Such an emotional piece. I could really imagine all of that happening, with such sad and sombre people. It was an unexpected ending, and I like the imagery you made with her standing out in her wedding dress amongst all the black.
Well done.

Tammie

Hmmm very unique poem.. you say some of your poems are true, some not.. I find it's hard to fake feelings like the one's in this peice. Just an excellent, emotional work of art. This is the kind of poetry I like to see. 5/5 from me and keep writing! - John :)

Incredible. Imagery was so powerful in this. And the idea, ahh, just so unique. I love the title, but could wait for this kind of inside. Also, the sad emotions where captured perfectly. This poem literally blew me away!
Flawless!
5/5

Well written spine chilling poem