by PassingAngel Oct 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
So here we go |
by Ingrid
Well written, good rhyming and a good story to match:) |
Wow |
by Sarah
Amazing poem ! well written & beautifully penned 5/5 |
by miss4re
This poem was amazing it felt just like me and my ex it made me cry, it was very touching i tell you!! keep it up miss |
by *Charisma*
I like this poem a lot. It speaks from the heart. It's very very good. But I do suggest you concentrate more on the flow. Some lines have more syllables than others and I think as poets, that's what most of us struggle with, is making it say what we want, but within a certain structure. But overall, this poem is very good. I enjoyed your 3rd 4th and 5th stanzas alot. Good job! |