Good poem. I can relate to it. I'm holding onto someone that I know I have to let go. But I loved it. I hope you can take the time to read one of mine.

I like this poem a lot. It speaks from the heart. It's very very good. But I do suggest you concentrate more on the flow. Some lines have more syllables than others and I think as poets, that's what most of us struggle with, is making it say what we want, but within a certain structure. But overall, this poem is very good. I enjoyed your 3rd 4th and 5th stanzas alot. Good job!
Charisma*

This poem was amazing it felt just like me and my ex it made me cry, it was very touching i tell you!! keep it up miss

Amazing poem ! well written & beautifully penned 5/5

Wow
Its so sad and so beautiful
good bye is always the hardest thing to say.

Well written, good rhyming and a good story to match:)

It still hurts as much as it did
That's why I should let it go
This is something we have to rid
Before the sadness kills us both

^^

These words were most profound to me and especially the last line touched me deeply. Indeed we can destry each other, when we refuse to let go of a bad relationship!

Good write, I am glad I stumbled upon it:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid