Wow...this poem is really powerful!!!!!!! i love it!! it flowed so smooth and it was amazing. great job

You'd be surprised how many people are shallow.

This poem is really powerful.

5/5

great job!

Excellent!

Really great!

My fave lines..

Fake a cry
Crave attention
Hide the truth
You've failed to mention

Pour your soul
Into strangers hands
Pretend complications
That you'll never understand

I like the simplicity of it, and the realism and metaphors you use!

Great piece!

Keep it up!