by xxSuicidalxx Oct 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Pain |
I didn't find this one to have the same depth as your other pieces which may be due to the length but it just felt that it lacked something that the others had. The flow was a bit off in places and I think the layout could do with a little work but otherwise it was a nice piece. |
Great poem. |