Hugs je--nna sooper tightly. this was amazing as always. i love the way you composed it and i could see everything.

I stitched together your lips, closing them tight;
And I colored in your eyes, to make more sense --
Black for the blackest of all teenage hearts,
And permanent, so you`d never speak to me again.
I stabbed a knife into your back, twisting it in;
Hoping that it would hit a sensitive spot in you,

that was absolutly amazing! favorite part

I see youve been going through rough times jenna,
just know ill be here for you when you need me,
this is a good poem by the way,
i give it a 5/5 as always!!!

Like I mentioned in another comment, I'm not fond of the style/form - though I do love the words, and the actual *writing*. It's wonderful.

You never fail to amaze me.