Amazing.

Damn! ^-^

Wow I loved it......at a point I felt like I was there but just couldn't see it comin...lol

Wow cory...this is so beautiful. you have a wonderful talent specially since you've used your experences...5/5 hun...beautifully written...the flow was terrific along w/ the whole piece!

The way you portray your message was flawless and wonderful! 5/5

Wow, amazing turely. Perfect scene, imagery was amazing, just Brilliant.

A perfect poem, I would say!
5/5

So dark. amazing poem. well written. its short and thats what makes it great. :)

Wow.. i feel like i was there, like.. i did it and one of the people dien at the same time.
great job!
i know its not yet but happy veterans day :)

Perfection.* keep it up. 5/5

Wow this poem made me shuder i loved it

Really enjoyed this, excellent word use. 5/5, Em x