Why 'decadence'......?

This little piece is an honestly erotic lyric...

Excellent poem and well written , I liked the way you expressed yourself in this one . Gave me a sence of pleasure , great job . especially these lines :::::insistent waves, steady tide throb
scent of hair, your neck, your warm
delectable slow hungry pulse,
don't stop, don't
hum-tumbled words soft
let me pull you into
rich dark weak, sweet
oblivion

Good work , keep it up , your friend Tracy d ~~~5/5~~~

Wow...
I love this from the beginning to the end, it is excellently written and very emotional. Unique piece with fantastic descriptions and original, unusual rhythm. This is one of the best love poems I've read in a while.
Greatly done!
5/5

Beautiful rhythmical poem girl, steady my beating heart, Delicious you have caught the moment and taken me to sweet sweet remembrance!

As always fantastic work!

Nicko

Three years ago I asked "why decadence"

perhaps the title was confessional....

tantalizing speculation cannot solve the question but, this is still quite effectively incredible..

love,
gramma

Three years ago I asked "why decadence"

perhaps the title was confessional....

tantalizing speculation cannot solve the question but, this is still quite effectively incredible..

love,
gramma