Wow that was so Pr3tty!!! i could really imagine the two of them how they are dancing like they were floating...!!! great job!! keep it up!!!

This is a great piece- it flows smoothly, the rhyme scheme is flawless, it creates a wonderful mood/milieu and has some fantastic images. It almost reads like a song. Most of all though, is the overwhelming emotion one feels upon reading this-it is quite simply, a beautiful poem of love.

Peace, poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

A beautiful poem
you captured the feeling of ectasy that only true happiness can bring
loved it! 5/5!

Aww this is such a sweet poem! It shows your emotions so clearly. The flow is flawless, and the rhyming is so well written, not sounding forced at all. You created clear imagery in my mind as I read this, I could imagine everything. I loved this line most, I thought it was so sweet;
"The stars may twinkle baby, but you shine."
I really enjoyed reading this, it put a smile on my face. :] 5/5 for a great poem, you deserve it.

Tammie

This is beautiful.
The emotion and depth you put into this piece are clear for the reader to see, while the imagery you painted was beautifully done, it creates very vivid pictures.
Your flow was flawless throughout the entire piece and I found this to have a beautiful opening with each stanza thereafter getting better and better.
Beautifully written.

Excellent poem. Wonderfully written. This is such a beautiful poem and you've expressed your emotions wonderfully. Also, the flow and rhymes here were pretty much flawless.

5/5 Because you truly deserve it.

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

I sooo luved it u r so sweet i am goin thru a hard time with my boy frend rite now and this is helping me 2 cope. u shud talk to him(jk) but i would really appreciate some pointers so plz check out some of my work~
~taylor~</3

Sweet. Everything was perfect!

This was a really sweet poem. You can really sense the emotions in it. Any gal would be lucky to have a guy that can write like that!! Keep up the good work. ~Tara

I like your writing style, you always manage to create vivid and beautiful imagery and to express emotions excellently in your love poems.
The choice of words here is great, you created truly captivating imagery in every stanza.
Amazing job.
5/5

Yea. I don't like most love poems, this one included. So I'll comment mostly on the writing style.

It flows very well, and the lines are just long enough and just descriptive enough to get your point enough. You also have some very creative points that I haven't read before.

Another 5/5 from you. A favorite now!!!

Aww this piece was just wonderful.

Another poem that just made me smile, and I love when poems make me smile, :] The love expressed was beautiful and the images you painted with your words were flawless.

Well done *5/5*

That was so sweet....beautiful job on this piece....so heartfelt and passionate....very vivid inagery too....amazing work on this! Keep writing! I have to say, your poems are some of the best I've read! :) 5/5