Nice first poems, it was short but well written

Please keep writing and I will keep reading

5/5

AWW! I love this poem. I can relate VERY much! I feel like that sumtimes too so know that you're not alone

Great work on a very well expressed piece. Easy to relate with, a sad poem thought a joy to read.

Well this one is truely short but the emotion of loneliness are captured perfectly in each lines.. and i can say i can relate on this one. by the way, i suggest to enhance more of your imagination to make it more beautiful.. don't get me wrong it's nice and run smoothly but just to make it more interesting enhance your imagination.

Awesome first poem! Very well expressed and well written. Keep up the good work!!!

Again the emotion is there but really try to express it try maybe some poetry work books or different expressive activities
3/5

An honest and well writen poem! Well done...

Nice job on your first poem!! full of emotion.... awesome job! 5/5

Great amount of descriptive words shown here, and the array of emotion present in this poem was amazing. well done, and this is your first poem?? you sure then have a lot of talent!!

5/5 David

Awsome poems!!!!!!!!!! ur a great poet and i know ur future poems will be great too!!!

Wow it is really amazing to me to think this is your first poem. It that good nice job....keep up the writing and I will keep reading 5/5

Pretty decent poem 4/5

Its short and powerful love it!

Sad, yet amazing.

I LOVED IT!!!

5/5

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Hey short and sweet lol great poem! 5/5

--emz--

I really liked this poem and relate to it quite well =P You did a great job at writing it, the wording, the emotions *which for me is the most important part of any poem* and the flow were all fantastic =) 5/5 and great job =)
~*Rhea*~

P.S. Thanks for the comment =) That one has a lot of meaning in it for me and I like to hear what people think about it =)

I think you have a awsome amount of talent

I love this poem. It's awesome! 5/5

Nice work keep it up

This poem is so touchin & way 2 nice. I urge u not to stop writin, coz ur poems are lovely. What a talent u hav, keep it up!!