Autumn

by Ingrid   Oct 9, 2007


Meadows covered in hoar-frost

Sunlight shining through the branches

lighting the path

covered with brightly colored leaves

Silence all around

Winter will be here soon

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Meadows covered in hoar-frost
    ^^ this gave a very very detailed vision and took me the reader to what you where describing

    Sunlight shining through the branches
    ^^ i picture being on a lake and looking through the leaves on a tree and seeing the sun accent the bark of the branches

    lighting the path
    ^^i see myself looking down a dirt path in the middle of the woods

    covered with brightly colored leaves
    ^^ now this makes me think of a time of year like fall or something

    Silence all around
    ^^gives me the intuition that something is coming or dawning

    Winter will be here soon
    ^after all the images of the pretty autumn was described i felt a bit sad that winter would rob us of the beauty

    great way to look and appreciate nature! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    An absolutely beautiful nature poem that filled my mind with vivid imagery. Nice job! Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    I love poems about nature and this is short but sweet, very beautiful, well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is a very beautiful and inspiring write, Ingrid. The imagery was perfect -- and Autumn is my favorite season -- you put it together very nicely. I wish I could say more but I'm out of words. :) All things considered, though: this write is any beautiful word in the dictionary. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow, this is brilliant. You brought to life so many wonderful, colorful images and the feelings that usually accompany me through autumn. I could see what you were seeing clearly, and it was marvelous. I can honestly say that this poem took the breath out of me because it was so beautiful. I could stand up and applaud right now.
    Very well done.