by Devon
Way to go ingrid! |
by Cindy
I love Autum.....Your words have painted a very vivid picture for the minds eye. |
by Elapsed
Short and sweet and a joy to read |
by David
Nice and short, beautiful and very relaxing! |
by John Long
This is a beautiful poem. You have brought a incisive style of writing to a much covered subject ,fraught with cliche, that is bright, fresh and very welcome. |
Short but sweet I like it a lot! |
This is so beautiful... Your description in this piece is truly vivid, so captivating. |
by mohamed
Short but great work..keep it up.. |
Beautiful Piece!!! |
by Liz
Love the simplicity of this poem. Everytime I go outside, I think up a poem in my head about Autumn, but i can never get it written down. And reading this it seems like it comes so easily for you, heh. I loved it. 5/5 |
I usually don't like poems like this but hey it's my favorite season so it pulled a heart string or two. :) 4. |
by Anthony
I can picture it |
Its been ages since i hv been to this site & i am sure i hv missed so much these days.....spl poems like these and some good friends too. |
Short and sweet... beautiful.. |
Short, but for some reason I really really liked it. It was like..a long haiku or something. xD I'm not very good with expressing myself. I know that sounds weird considering I write poetry. (I write better when i have no personal feelings on the matter. otherwise it gets all muddled up.) |
by Tony
Really really beautiful and simply stunning imagery. |
by Lovely Bones
Wow, this is brilliant. You brought to life so many wonderful, colorful images and the feelings that usually accompany me through autumn. I could see what you were seeing clearly, and it was marvelous. I can honestly say that this poem took the breath out of me because it was so beautiful. I could stand up and applaud right now. |
This is a very beautiful and inspiring write, Ingrid. The imagery was perfect -- and Autumn is my favorite season -- you put it together very nicely. I wish I could say more but I'm out of words. :) All things considered, though: this write is any beautiful word in the dictionary. 5/5 |
by The Prince
I love poems about nature and this is short but sweet, very beautiful, well done :) |
An absolutely beautiful nature poem that filled my mind with vivid imagery. Nice job! Keep writing, always and forever.... |