Comments : Autumn

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Meadows covered in hoar-frost
    ^^ this gave a very very detailed vision and took me the reader to what you where describing

    Sunlight shining through the branches
    ^^ i picture being on a lake and looking through the leaves on a tree and seeing the sun accent the bark of the branches

    lighting the path
    ^^i see myself looking down a dirt path in the middle of the woods

    covered with brightly colored leaves
    ^^ now this makes me think of a time of year like fall or something

    Silence all around
    ^^gives me the intuition that something is coming or dawning

    Winter will be here soon
    ^after all the images of the pretty autumn was described i felt a bit sad that winter would rob us of the beauty

    great way to look and appreciate nature! 5/5