by HarlequinMasked Oct 9, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Collapsed down in a shopping mall |
by *Charisma*
Very good job. I like the last stanza a lot. This was easy to relate to and had good flow and rhyme. The second line of your poem was very very good. I look forward to more of your work. |
I LOVE IT!!! Great poem! |