Comments : The Shopping Mall

  • 17 years ago

    by Always and Never

    I LOVE IT!!! Great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very good job. I like the last stanza a lot. This was easy to relate to and had good flow and rhyme. The second line of your poem was very very good. I look forward to more of your work.
    Charisma*