by candi Oct 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
There is a land that i dream of, |
by Fsams
Candi, your poem is very beautifula nd it has a very important message or the content is worthwhile. I found some typos and little bloomers. You could correct the (My dream was shattered..., Still/sill) |
I love this! The imagery you use is so powerful and emotive, i was totally drawn in by this. Brilliant work |
by Veamm
Excellent! |