Aww. this is so sad. :( i would NEVER leave u at the alter...

This is very sad...any person who would leave someone at the alter should have the same thing done to them...it is very wrong

OMG, that is so sad but at the smae time you get the feeling in to the reader. Good work :)

Wow! a simple poems but it does have a lot of meaning. so sad she left ur heart on ur hands. she never took so sad. can relate to this. truly a sad poem you have wroten here. the words were jujst great. the flow was right. i say an amazing job. 5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy