The imagery you portrayed in this piece is beautifully done. it creates very vivid pictures for the reader. flow is good througnvut the entire piece. the opening is powerful and from there on it just gets better and better. beautiful ending. nicely done.

You are an amazing writer! Your peoms flow beautifully and portray pictures so ver vividly...you definatly have a gift!

A chilling masterpiece, well formatted, good pacing. i enjoyed the message most, you could really learn a lot. then the ghost part got me

your servant:
atticus

Lol. yes...very non-fiction

Those are always the best poems when they just come out lol... Whenever it happens its always best to just see where it goes. BTW Awesome job! keep it up!

The way you put your words together is simply amazing, i loved it. you seriously have an amazing talent. nice work 5/5

If you hear the story
Know that its true
Listen to the girl
Or the same death might come to you

loved those lines^^

Excellent
Very nicely worded
with a superb flow and its
5/5

Excellent
Very nicely worded
with a superb flow and its
5/5

I so love your writting!! It is really great!! HEy send me a message I would like to talk to you!! Plz!

Good

This is amazing. i cant describe it. u caught my attention right away and kept me till the end, another amazing piece.

Great poem i gave u 5/5 x

GREAT WORK
RUNAWAY GIRL (ANOTHER TITLE)
AND THIS THOUGHT OF YOURS THAT YOU HAVE PENNED DOWN ITS REALLY DIFFERENT

please dont forget to RRC my pOems
poem1:reason
poem2:deaf dumb blind

REGARDS
MILESTONE

5/5 FROM MY SIDE

Damn, I really loved it. It was really good.

5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Damn, I really loved it. It was really good.

5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

I really like it =) The stanza:
Now every day
When teenagers fight
With their parents
Her ghost warns them of that night

really gave me chills, because it's just really great written..=]
5/5
x

I really liked this piece alot more then the last of yours I read. I think the imagery you portrayed was nicely done and painted a perfect picture into my mind. The ending was really good it grasped me and held me captured within the emotions. A nicely written poem keep it up ~Mel

U r a stunning writer that was amazing I have a lot of poems comment on mine keep up the good work I love the ending