Okay.

I was drawn to this poem because of the title, and I wasn't disappointed.

I found this to be both original and unique in concept, and you portrayed your feelings very well.

Flow was good throughout and the imagery you created painted very vivid pictures for me.

The only suggestion I have for this, is not to write in shorthand, "Coz of my love for you...
"

In my opinion, it just lessens the meaning of the poem.

Apart from that, I enjoyed this.