"like I'm in a huge city" << I think that might sound better as "huge, huge city. " but that's just my idea.

Darling, I love the poem. It's really really good. I loved the first stanza especially. (:

Keep it up, it's amazing
[[Sorry such a short comment, not much to say.. the poem was just about flawless.]]

This is seems too common and simple but honestly i love the emotion in here because of the emotions in here, it was sweet. keep it up!

Well some lines I felt that the rhyming was a tad forced because I felt as though you were just using that word so it would rhyme so I didn't think you did your best there but as for the emotion and idea I've been here so I know what it feels like so thats why I sympothize with you 4/5

Hmm, i agree a few parts seem a tad bit forced, and in the second stanza first line, i might change that "is" to "are", and also in the third line maybe change the "to" to "towards", other than that it's a great poem and i know how it feels to have somone close move away. 4/5

It was a good piece, but didn't really
make sense with the words you used.
ex: huge city. but apart from that it
was great. 4/5 from me

nikki