Heart Of Dust

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 9, 2007


Put my heart in your hands
let you know what i feel
I let myself trust you
But only one last time

You took it, ripped it
Shredded it to peices
left me there
lying alone

How could you do this to me?
I scream to the sky
Please help me
understand why

I trusted you
I loved you
You were my idol
Till you let me fall

Now all thats left
is a puppet of me
left with empty eyes and a heart
that no longer see

Everywhere i go
I cringe i don't trust
cause in your hands
you let my heart
crumble
to dust

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  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    It started out nice and tranquill then the ripped and shredded part threw me for a loop, really surprised me. but i love it, i like poems that get you like this one did

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent poem with beautiful mournful feelings clearly depicted. It totally makes sense and I loved the word choice. Keep it up 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    Very good, i love the message and feeling in it...5/5 dear. i really like this alot.

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I love that poem. It had alot of meaning and you could just feel the emotion radiating off of it. Great poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This came across as really strong despite the sadness and anger. I liked the imagery you used although the line "left with empty eyes and a heart" would fit much better if you drop the heart - how does a heart see?
    Other than that there was some really strong lines and images. Great job.

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