This came across as really strong despite the sadness and anger. I liked the imagery you used although the line "left with empty eyes and a heart" would fit much better if you drop the heart - how does a heart see?
Other than that there was some really strong lines and images. Great job.

I love that poem. It had alot of meaning and you could just feel the emotion radiating off of it. Great poem. 5/5

Very good, i love the message and feeling in it...5/5 dear. i really like this alot.

Excellent poem with beautiful mournful feelings clearly depicted. It totally makes sense and I loved the word choice. Keep it up 5/5

Tc
Fsams

It started out nice and tranquill then the ripped and shredded part threw me for a loop, really surprised me. but i love it, i like poems that get you like this one did

your servant:
atticus