The Butterfly Affect

by disturbed one   Oct 9, 2007


Wow, finally, this is my first poem after a 2 or 3 month writers block. So its not too good but its titled the butterfly affect cuz it reminded me of the movie

Blood stains and broken promises,
Is all she'll ever see,
She writes to escape her fate,
In hope of setting free,

The story portrays each,
of her ten years,
Every last detail,
Every last fear,

Anything to fake reality,
She changes the end,
Now shes in a dream world,
Trying to pretend,

Killing off family members,
With the power of her mind,
Shes getting revenge,
But shes only trapped in time

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Writer's block is a pain in the rear lol. Nice start up after one though, 5/5, Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    I hate writer's block i understand the feeling but this is an excellent poem to come back with after that. lol wonderful poem the title did capture me though keep writing thanx for the comments.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Anything to fake reality,
    She changes the end,
    Now shes in a dream world,
    Trying to pretend,
    ^^^
    Excellent stanza .... changing parts in hopes of having a different outcome....

    Killing off family members,
    With the power of her mind,
    Shes getting revenge,
    But shes only trapped in time
    ^^^
    Loved this ending ....
    Glad to see you've escaped the clutches of writer's block ... they sure can have a grip on us by times.

    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Heer

    Aww nice. very sweet and intresting to read
    kepp them coming
    Fillie

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Hey we all have writers block it is just how we deal with it that matters. hope you fell better and i hope that your poems keep coming
    5
    :~)Sam

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