I think it is a well written piece of advice. Reading it brought to mind images of a good friend or relative doling out advice whilst providing a shoulder to cry on. I think most people will be able to relate to what you say in this piece and I for one found it inspiring.

I liked it
i thought it was very inspirational and beautiful
5/5

Im spellbound my dear. This this not only a poem but a great encouragement and fostering to the ones who are discouraged and in depths of dispare. 5/5 all the way