by *Charisma* Oct 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Dazed and Abused |
by TillyMariex
Omfg...i effin love this.its horrible...but i love the way you expressed it. 10/5 fer sure!! =] |
F*in'a!!! |
by Midnight Sun
That is extremely powerful! I mean the way you can make me envision this scene is amazing. And, too, how easily you can make him seem heartless and cold (borderline maniac) with the line about watching tv after he beats her half to death. Amazing job Charisma!!! :) 5/5 without a doubt! |
by Gem
Oo, i nearly cried at this one. |
by Jenni Marie
"wish she could have read through sugar coated lies" <-- my favourite lines in the whole piece. they just held so much power and depth. the flow was good throughout and the imagery you painted was beautiful, it was like i could see everything that was happening. this is beautiful...heart breaking and filled with melancholy, yes. but still beautiful and elegant |