A Sensation

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Oct 9, 2007


A sensation really strange
Something so difficult to explain
As if an angel caressed my body
And my heart felt like flying so suddenly
An invasion of silence
Like if the birds stopped chirping
The wind that makes my hair go crazy
For an instant stopped blowing
I didn't know if I was dreaming
Or if it was real
How long was the spell?
A second or an eternity?
I only knew that my feelings rose
The day my eyes met yours

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    Now this poem was done great although it was short the images and the emotions were great you made the reader want to be apart of your experience great work. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Aww, this was sweet, yet another of your divine poetic expressions of love. perfect.. asking the reader questions pulls them in to your poem and you did that nicely! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dorian

    Great job. keep it up