by Sherry Lynn Oct 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Beaten and broken |
by Gizmo
I think it was written beautiful but as many people will think of god when they read this, it kind of puts me off it. but everyone to their own. |
Very lovely poem Sherry Lynn. I liked it a lot. |
by Jenni Marie
*spins you around to dance* :) this was such a beautiful and heartfelt write. the emotion and depth you portray in this piece is amazing, even though the poem is relatively short. beautiful opening with each line there after becoming more powerful and intriguing, while the reader is easily able to feel your emotions throughout the piece. i adore the ending..So inspiring and uplifting and it certainly put a smile on my face..Beautiful write! |
This is very beautiful.. I really enjoed with this poem...:) 5/5 |
by Cuddles
This is wonderfully uplifting and inspirational; a joy to read. Beautiful... |